I just added a more dramatic lighting, darkened the overall figure ( to making the overall silhouette easier to read) and more detail on the hair and also rim light ( to emphasise the moonlight's effect). I recommend working on a larger canvas if you want to do more detail work. The highlight on the both eyes are usually on the same side so do take note on that when you draw. Also, look more into ambient occlusion for painting if you wanna learn more about rendering in general. Use references when you are unclear about how to paint or draw something and just do more studies on 3D forms and planes.

My Oc Eris. I kinda don't like it. - Rendering - Community Driven Art Feedback Platform

Chaos Kartoffel · 2026-10-16T16:35:39.003Z

I kinda don't like it. Im really happy with how it turned out but some parts just feel off. Could somebody please help?

I just added a more dramatic lighting, darkened the overall figure ( to making the overall silhouette easier to read) and more detail on the hair and also rim light ( to emphasise the moonlight's effect). I recommend working on a larger canvas if you want to do more detail work. The highlight on the both eyes are usually on the same side so do take note on that when you draw. Also, look more into ambient occlusion for painting if you wanna learn more about rendering in general. Use references when you are unclear about how to paint or draw something and just do more studies on 3D forms and planes.

@artwodguyvor 6 Tagen

Amazing paintover!

@chaos83359vor 5 Tagen

thank you so much

My Oc Eris. I kinda don't like it.

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