Hi, here is my over, how I would push your painting further. First I would say there are some issue with form and prespective. Bike and character proportions could be better. As we talk about rendering, while painting think firstly bigger forms, put the emphasis on soft transitions in cylindrical surfaces. Value wise skin could use more contrast, and clothing could be more simplified. Too efficently paint focus on shapes, lock them in, later add texture and strokes within the shape. Hope that gives you some ideas, keep up the good work!

First semi sucssesful attempt at painting I think - Rendering - Community Driven Art Feedback Platform

Ori Nagan · 2026-10-02T15:45:57.239Z

I mean im kinda new to painting, Im primarly a line artist so I think I have a good grounding in prespective and form and such. Though recently wanted to try an branch a little to painting and this is my first kinda sucsessful attempt at it 🐥. Because Im new to painting Im having a hard time critisizing my work on my own and wanted some feedback. Focus on rendering, values and such

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Hi, here is my over, how I would push your painting further. First I would say there are some issue with form and prespective. Bike and character proportions could be better. As we talk about rendering, while painting think firstly bigger forms, put the emphasis on soft transitions in cylindrical surfaces. Value wise skin could use more contrast, and clothing could be more simplified. Too efficently paint focus on shapes, lock them in, later add texture and strokes within the shape. Hope that gives you some ideas, keep up the good work!

First semi sucssesful attempt at painting I think

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