I love the idea! I'm quite intrigued. I would recommend, though, defining the hands a bit more. Right now they appear to be skinny rectangles. I would have a bit more detail, especially to the fist and overall shape. I personally would find a reference or take a picture of your own hand in that exact position. I would also recommend making the headpiece more readable. Sometimes I see a transparent cloth that needs a bit more transparency, or hair and the rim of glasses. Defining the edges and values for the elements will definitely bring clarity to your idea and what people are looking at. | Artwod Feedback