Hi Nate! That’s quite an impressive drawing! It took me a while to figure out how you could improve it. I think that the drawing lacks a bit of eye guidance. It’s beautiful everywhere! So I tried to darken your couple (blue outline) and steer the eye to the face of the woman (green) by adding more shadows in the face and add more highlights to the hair. I hope it helps!

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Nathan Sati · 2026-07-20T17:12:30.826Z

Hi, I'm Nate. I'm looking to see how I can improve this drawing. It was done for a commission, and I'm happy with everything. so far

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