Howdy! You have a very interesting rendering style, that's for sure! But your pencil skill needs a solid anatomy/proportions foundation to work well. Here I used a basic liquify tool in Photoshop to correct the form and ratios. (Sorry if some features are not placed according to the actual reference, I did it blindly.) You see, any face has three equal parts: hairline-eyes, eyes-nostrils, nostrils and nostrils chin. Also every central part should sit on a midline which is moving to the side in three-quarter view, the lips here are the worst offender. And finally, the cranium should be bigger, a good rule of thumb is the eyes, they are accurately placed right in the middle of the whole head height. The more volume hair of a person has the more inches you should add to the regular head size. I recommend you to pay attention to those in the future. Other than that, great job! C: | Artwod Feedback