Overall your face alignment seems okay. The only thing I noticed was the horns. For the draw over I added the other horn tip that should be visible and I changed where it attaches to the skull as well as its orientation as it moves back over the top of her head. To make her look more mature all I did was add a few extra lines around her eyes, nose and mouth. There’s essentially two major differences between adult heads and children. The first is that as we age our skin becomes looser and less supple so we get more lines and wrinkles. The easiest way to make someone look older is just to add more lines. If you add too many lines they can go from mature to geriatric very quickly but just a few subtle lines around the nose and mouth will really help give that illusion of age. The other main difference is proportion. Our eyes don’t really change that much in size as we grow. So infants have eyes that are very big compared to the rest of their face, but as their head grows their eyes appear smaller in proportion to the rest of their face. So if you want to make a character older try making their eyes a little smaller. I didn’t touch them in my paint over because the way you’ve painted them seems more of a stylistic choice. Really nice character design. I maybe would have put the horn behind her ear rather than in front of it but great work. | Artwod Feedback