I see that you are providing a fairly finished work. It does not hurt to post some rough/blocked in forms or gestures with a roughed in background. Just as long as it is not too messy and your audience can read the poses and BG elements. Sometimes we as artist spend too much time on an art piece that might not be working when feedback from the community can help us avoid this. I have some suggestions for your composition. This is a way I approach a rough idea and ask people if they see the story I am attempting to illustrate. As you can see, I am not very detailed with the gesture/block in. A quick BG thrown in. The poses used are meant to illustrate "in your face" intimidation. The ice cream cone did not work well with the brute being so close. Anyway, let me know what you think. I pray this will help you in your artistic journey. Keep at it.