I think the face looks pretty good, but the pose does look a little stiff. you can fix that by adding some gesture to the arms and legs as well as the torso. Also she feels like she is missing her pelvic area. I hope my sketch helps :)
Anstriche (1)
Female combat soldier
Künstlernotiz:
Hi community, I started to study perspective (from the book "Draw Anything") so now I practice to draw dynamic poses in more perspective. I just would like somebody to review this sketch of my story character from the POV of perspective gesture & movement and anatomy before I go more into details. I struggled very much with this face as this 3/4 facial expression took me hours and many redoing, but I am still not convinced, that the eyes, nose and mouth are in correct shapes. I'd be much appreciated for an advice how to construct face in that angle and with the features. And for sure if someone could advice me with the feet as this is also a nightmare for me when this is drawn in more perspective. But if you find anything more to be fixed, I am all ears. Thank you. :-)