Leon semi realism practice

i made the jaw third too big i know, i know. other than the jaw what can i improve pls tell me, i wanna improve at drawing semi realism. i'd appreciate a feedback ( i am too lazy to fix the jaw :D )

bath house

Hello! Thank you, everyone, for the valuable feedback. It helped me a lot. The setting they're in is a bathhouse. they're relaxing and chilling I want to focus on the blue-haired guy and his friends. For some reason, I don't really like the atmosphere, and the environment doesn't look very appealing. While I know I have some anatomy issues to work on, I want to focus primarily on the vibe, color, lighting, and atmosphere of the setting they are in. Thank you!

Day 27

Concept art

Green & Red

I can't seem to get past this stage with any of my drawings. I am not sure what's wrong with the perspective as well as the anatomy, among other things that I can't put my finger on.

Day 14

another day

Foreshortening demo

I am suffering from foreshortening. Can you tell me how can I improve it. Also can you recommend some videos.

6/26/26

Day 26

27-06-26

Struggling with construction, perspective and foreshortening. The characters feel kinda flat and I want them to look more 3D. Any tips on improving the overall forms and depth?

Manga panel practice

I was practicing one page comic/manga. I am trying to practice telling small stories - small event in order to slowly build up to multipage ones. the top 3 panels went well I feel like? the third panel top i like the most because I could apply the small - medium - big well from Arne's intermediate road which I have been enjoying. The bottom 2 were meant to be quick action-reaction - weapon draw to weapon/hand disabled. This evolved into what was meant to be a ricochet which I don't think really is readable. I learned a lot about perspective here. I would be grateful for any feedback - probably not understandable in terms of what was happening in bottom 2 panels I reckon?