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Hi everyone, I decided to stop at this stage because I feel like I've reached the limit of my current skills, and I don't want to keep polishing the wrong things. There are a few areas I'm struggling with, and I'd really appreciate any feedback. The biggest issue I see is the creature's anatomy. It was mainly inspired by a rhinoceros and a bison, but I feel like the head and the body don't connect naturally. They almost feel like they belong to two different animals, and I can't figure out how to make the anatomy feel more believable. I also tried to design the armor so that it would feel like one cohesive set, but I'm still not happy with it—especially the armor on the creature's head. It doesn't feel convincing to me, and I'm not sure what direction would improve it. Another goal was to push the design toward a more realistic creature rather than a stylized one. However, I feel like it still ended up looking stylized. On top of that, the creature feels much more stylized than the orc rider, so they don't seem to belong to the same world. If you notice any other issues, I'd really appreciate hearing about them as well.

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