Hey there! I really liked this drawing! :D The theme and the narrative are very interesting :D The main issue I see is with the proportions, and a little bit with the position of the torso. As for the proportions, the drawing feels a bit off because the torso is somewhat small, and the legs are also too short. Even if we don’t fully draw the legs, notice that I indicated their length to get a better sense of how long the dress should be and to make the dress's folds better match the legs' position. As for the torso position, I feel like the upper part should have a slight twist... or maybe the opposite, that the ribcage stays more frontal while the hips rotate a little. Either way, I think that would give the pose a stronger gesture :) Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback