Hello Ian, Nice interaction between two characters, the composition is nice and you also had a bit of context with the table which is important in my opinion when you want to convey a scene. And we have a nice hint of perspective as well with the token. I decided to put the hand of Data just in front of is face since he's delivering a sensitive information (or at least I thought it would convey more of the secretive aspect of the moment) I also open a bit the pose of Dr . Crusher in order to keep her more at ease even though she's probably tense in that moment. I also added a chair in the back of Data to reinforce the impression of the scene. (I'm on a digital support and I realise some of the proposition I'm suggesting can be hard to figure out on paper) Great piece. Keep it up ^^ | Artwod Feedback