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Verbessere deine Komposition und Tiefe, Lesezeit: 3 Minuten
Master shape language and value composition through a six-step exercise combining rectangles, triangles, and circles to build stronger design instincts.
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Simple portrait (?)
I beg your feedback ❤️ The neck is a little bit short but the face itself is important to me

Robot
Hii I was trying to draw a robot for the first time. Even if a like it, something is off. Any advice?

Marie from Splatoon
I feel like something always looks off / flat with my faces. I think it might have to do with the jaw but I can’t tell for sure. + I think it might look uneven, but I’m not sure how to consistently get my faces to look even / not super skewed to one side w/o them looking stiff instead.

Sketch
The low angle perspective has been a struggle for me, the legs are looking really strange

Puppeting
A piece I made a bit ago but never felt satisfied with it Something about the composition just feels off, I am struggling with proper debt

kid moe - goblin dragon riders
After some feedback I made a bunch of changes to the wings and some small changes to the Goblins and the back leg.

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Intermediate Road Workout 2
I’d loves me feedback on perspective and secondary and tertiary forms.

plague
i managed to make it look more polished but its very unreadable especially the skirts shadows, struggiling to make it look more 3d