Hi again!! It's awesome to see you still going strong :D This time it's a real quick one. First of all, compliments on your hatching and on the teeth! You made the teeth very appealing and skipped the usual mistake of trying to detail every tooth. You also caught all the little wrinkles that a face makes when smiling so wide. And the shadows are so minimalistic and accurate. My changes really just boiled down to symmetry! In the planning stage, make sure the head follows one center line and the corners of the eyes are aligned. I would encourage doing simpler drills for symmetry, like drawing an ellipse with a line cutting it in half, and just doing that over and over. The website Practice Drawing This has a lot of exercises you can do. I don't know if I mentioned it before, but Rendering in Pen and Ink by Arthur L. Guptill is great for ink drawings specifically, Artwod introduced me to it a small while ago and it's been a game changer for my own work.

