So ! First of all, late answer, hope it's not too late to give you feedback though. Overall, very nice work. I love the solidity of your shapes and form and the illustration aspect and details are very nice. Since you weren't sure about the feedback you wanted, I decided to go for the perspective side of your drawing and the proportions. I wasn't sure if shortening this legs was on purpose but if it was the case, you can forget about what am I about to say. Basically the lower body could get a bit more love regarding the shapes and the porportions, legs should be longer (even though the right leg is going backward) You had a good grasp of how everything is working, at this point it's becoming more of refining your drawing before inking for example. I rework the shape and form of the crystal around the face of your character to match the volume of his face as wella s his eyes and the direction of his pupills. I also nitpick around all the object covering the suit and overall the gear. It's mostly figuring out what the perspective is, and where your character is sitting based on it. I traced an idea of perspective since the character is frontal to us, I figured it would be a more simple 2 vanishing point of view. Let me know if you have more question, I'll be glad to answer them. Have a good work !

Bloddy the Alien

artistvor 4 Wochen

Künstlernotiz:

Hello, something seems a bit strange about this picture, but I'm not sure what it is. Could you please help me check and correct it

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@julienmariettevor 5 Tagen

So ! First of all, late answer, hope it's not too late to give you feedback though. Overall, very nice work. I love the solidity of your shapes and form and the illustration aspect and details are very nice. Since you weren't sure about the feedback you wanted, I decided to go for the perspective side of your drawing and the proportions. I wasn't sure if shortening this legs was on purpose but if it was the case, you can forget about what am I about to say. Basically the lower body could get a bit more love regarding the shapes and the porportions, legs should be longer (even though the right leg is going backward) You had a good grasp of how everything is working, at this point it's becoming more of refining your drawing before inking for example. I rework the shape and form of the crystal around the face of your character to match the volume of his face as wella s his eyes and the direction of his pupills. I also nitpick around all the object covering the suit and overall the gear. It's mostly figuring out what the perspective is, and where your character is sitting based on it. I traced an idea of perspective since the character is frontal to us, I figured it would be a more simple 2 vanishing point of view. Let me know if you have more question, I'll be glad to answer them. Have a good work !