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Figures
Help me, it feels flat!

Don quijote polish
Hello! I have been trying to make a polished version of the character as a finished concept, but i don’t feel like it’s quite there yet. I tried giving the drawing some material separation and shadows. My main problema is the lighting. In a drawing meant for a concept art polished picture, i don’t know if this light is enough or if i have to add a stronger light source. I also wanted to ask for help with the construction. I often find myself making mistakes with the proportions or the prespective but i have been looking at this for so long that maybe i just can’t see them. As allways, if there is somethinig i missed that could be fixed, ley me know. Thanks!

Communication robot
Hello, here is a communication robot I spent a lot of time on especially getting the perspective right. I would appreciate any feedback on it.

Robot
Hello, i want some feedback how could it be better, and what should I look after.

11 - Screaming death
Screaming kills

Bran castle
Need more detail

Matilda Character Design
Something feels off; I'm quite spotty with the hands. But I'm also a bit iffy with the feet. The shadow creature behind her has a rather stiff pose in comparison to the front character as well. Your feedback will be appreciated! :)

Character rendering and lighting
Hi, I am struggling to figure out how to shade my character and his clothes especially with the color black that I used for the jacket. I haven't really decided on a light source, but ideally it's coming from the left side of him. Considering the materials as well I wanted it to be a cloth like material for the jacket and regular jeans. I would appreciate any help and input on this thanks.

plague
i need help figuring out whats the next step, i want to render the clothes to look more refined and painted but i simply dont know how to go about it so im hoping for some advice