Hi there! I think you are honestly so close to mastering this style, I had trouble picking up on anything so I really had to start nitpicking and I noticed sometimes your linework can be a bit more confident still. So even steadier lines, making sure they connect well and not intersect in small places (like the one I circled) it's those small things that I think will absolutely elevate your work when you apply them! So fantastic job, keep it up!! c:
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I'm struggling with form&depth, composition, values, anatomy, design, line quality
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use some guidelines to help w/ perspective
idk if full guidelines are needed yet, maybe just lock one horizon and the floor edge first so the room reads without making the sketch stiff
maybe block the body as a simple bean and two big leg shapes first, then check the knee and foot angles before adding the soft clothing so the pose reads more clearly.