First of all, I want to know if you used any reference and if so, which one ? I understand that you're trying and bring life into an inanimate object. I would say you have volume in your drawing, but it lack a bit of precision and clarity. If you give me some more information, I would be glad to help you figure out what you're trying to do (if it's not too late or you've already figure things out) Based on what I understand I tried and redraw at least something in volume. Let me know if I hit the mark or if I out of boundaries. | Artwod Feedback