I can see that you are aiming for an emotional story in your shot. The intimacy being shown by the Princess touching Links cheek while touching her heart. You can see that it can cause the intended flow, even if you had the ability to draw the characters with proper anatomy, to be lost. I made up a quick cartoony sketch to see if this will help you understand that since the Princess is the most affected by this heart felt good bye, the audience needs to see her face clearly. You can achieve this by twisting the top of the torso while leaving the legs planted where you had them. Also, Link did not seem to be looking at the Princess. Instead of a blank stare on Links face, the paint over is supposed to illustrate concern and the hand on her hand is to console her. Aiming for the same point of intimacy your piece was meant to convey. Try playing with the twisting of the body and retry this piece. This is not something we normally see when referring to Zelda characters. Keep up the good work. I pray this helps you along your artistic journey and keep practicing.