Portrait vampire

This is good but try to use darker colors for the eyes amd teeth as well as using values to your advantage to show depth. Shade around face as well and exaggerating the wrinkles and eyebrows. I also adjusted her eyes so that shes facing the viewer and not up at the sky. Its also good to add more splits in the hair since bangs dont sit in a perfect shape. I also added a neck and tried to make her shoulders raised. With the molding tool is made her face a little more even and made the eyes a similar size.

More detail on the face and prob neck ndshadows