I decided to draw this in my style since mine and yours are so different. But i drew this character as a teen/child. Your colors were very pale and grayish so keep in mind to use warmer colors around the same range mostly when its a warm color like yellow. Your pose was too stiff so try a curved body so show they are shy and show it in their face as well. Avoid using a bright white/gray, i used a light version of the skin color, cream. The browns are also around the same range of the skin color as well. If this character is a child, focus on make them smaller and chubbier because children have small limbs and dont usually came very thin. For a teenage like i did, you can make them lanky and have a more matured body type with longer limbs. I think the way you draw your feet and hands are too big so try making them smaller so the body connects better. Sorry for not using your drawing, i found this a little easier for me. | Artwod Feedback