Hello hello, Better later than never. Overall you did a great job. Character looks cool and relaxed. Line is fine and I love the graphic design around him. You mention an anatomy issue and a proportion issue, but I think it's mostly a proportion issue. Your boddy is working in general and it's mainly little things here and there that screw your drawing up. For example, the length between the pelvis and the ribcage is a bit to long (if we consider regular proportions) and your right arm (the one that is loose) is well drawn but in the wrong angle. You have the same problem with the right arm (the one that grab the sunglasses). You choose to draw the arm in a certain angle and this choice is an inbetween two different stories (if the arm looking toward us or away). I don't think in this case that your character is lacking in terms of proportions. He is around 6 and a half head, which is pretty regular, but not a real issue in my opinion. If you want to make it 7 heads, you will have to adjust every proportions of the body, whether it is the length of the ribcage, arms, legs and so on. I hope this feedback will help you. Feel free to ask more questions if needed. Good work !

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I’d need some feedback on the anatomy of this piece. My character is supposed to be 7½-head in proportions; I tried adjusting it to maintain that ratio, but now the anatomy/pose feels off or unbalanced. I’d appreciate any advice.

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@julienmariettevor 6 Tagen

Hello hello, Better later than never. Overall you did a great job. Character looks cool and relaxed. Line is fine and I love the graphic design around him. You mention an anatomy issue and a proportion issue, but I think it's mostly a proportion issue. Your boddy is working in general and it's mainly little things here and there that screw your drawing up. For example, the length between the pelvis and the ribcage is a bit to long (if we consider regular proportions) and your right arm (the one that is loose) is well drawn but in the wrong angle. You have the same problem with the right arm (the one that grab the sunglasses). You choose to draw the arm in a certain angle and this choice is an inbetween two different stories (if the arm looking toward us or away). I don't think in this case that your character is lacking in terms of proportions. He is around 6 and a half head, which is pretty regular, but not a real issue in my opinion. If you want to make it 7 heads, you will have to adjust every proportions of the body, whether it is the length of the ribcage, arms, legs and so on. I hope this feedback will help you. Feel free to ask more questions if needed. Good work !