@saritos

Peindre

Hi hi! It is great that you are learning a traditional medium and picking still life for practice. For future drawings,start by a bigger scale. In truth, we want to see masterpieces on larger canvases, but as artists, we prefer to keep to smaller proportions because it is simpler to conceal faults like that. A4 is the standard size; from there, you can go to smaller sizes like A5 or larger sizes like A3. Keep it within that range for minor exercises, and if you feel comfortable performing them, try larger canvases, such as 50x70 cm. Different sizes are needed for different subjects. You can utilize A4 to record multiple elements (normal framing), A3 for complicated scenarios, and A5 for close-ups and detail-focused learning. Since all of these overlap, they should be viewed more as guidelines rather than as rigid guides. Next would be rendering. Overall I would say you did a solid job. Avoid having blue/purple and stick to something simpler like warm yellow/brown or cool blue (purple makes everything artificial). Be mindful how you approach different materials- glass is way more reflective than orange. You can have little study on the side for each material before applying it in final art. Finally, be careful of the construction of a circle for glass. You can draw yourself a grid first before building a form on top of it. Hope it helps and happy learning!