Not a bad effort. You seem to be struggling more with understanding the basic forms in perspective. I’ve redrawn the cranial mass and the mask in roughly the same angles. Notice I haven’t drawn in any of the features. The first thing I want to point out is that the face is not flat. Your place ment of the nose is pretty good but you’re placing the eyes and mouth onto the surface of mask. The eyes are balls that sit inside the eye sockets and the lips lie on top of the tooth cylinder. These are smaller, 3D structures of the face. The point of the mask is to help simplify the front of the face so that you can more easily place it in perspective, especially at difficult angles. What I would recommend for you is to spend a little more time on the larger shapes and the proportions. Particularly the cranial mass. Practice drawing a sphere, finding the brow line and then cutting off the sides. You will find it much easier to place the features once you have a better understanding of the head as 3D object.
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