You did pretty well overall but at some point you stopped following your own reference. Tools can be useful, but only if you understand and can apply the fundamentals on your own. So keep practicing freehand. Proportions are all about relationships. How does one feature relate to another in terms of size and position? As an example you can use the holographic sight as a reference for how big things should be. Looking at your reference I can see that the length of the back end of the gun is about 2x the length of the sight. Forward of the sight the main body is about 2.5x the length. Finding these relationships is how you measure and doing it this way allows you to more easily draw the thing you want to draw from any angle. That’s how I knew, just from looking, that the back end of the gun was too short and your handle was too close. That’s why you ran out of room to draw in the trigger guard. Your ejection port was also way too big compared to your reference. In the reference it’s only slightly taller than the selector switch but you’ve drawn it twice as big. There are other inconsistencies that I’ve drawn such as the position of the pipe under the gas canister, the holes in the barrel shroud and the hole for the hand grip between the gun and the chainsaw. It’s important to draw what’s there and not let your brain draw what it ‘thinks’ should be there. Lastly, try to keep in mind your perspective. You can cheat the perspective but for practice you need to keep thinking about the vanishing points. It’s subtle but you’ve not accounted for the convergence of the lines from the back of the gun to the front. Drawing in the largest basic shape (a box encompassing the whole gun) and indicating the vanishing points will help you to maintain the correct orientation. Great design on the gun by the way. | Artwod Feedback