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The perspective is good, but one thing I think you should remember is that when you are drawing cylinders, the lines should be placed touching the curve Sorry if my explanation isn’t the best, I’m not the best at giving help but I hope you found this helpful :)
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Hey! Well, the first thing I’d recommend is drawing the complete form, basically constructing it as if you were seeing the object through X-rays. Doing this will help you understand the object much better and, as a result, draw it more accurately. I say this because the main issue in your drawing is that the half-cylinder on the left side is smaller than the one on the right, which already makes the form feel a bit off. Another thing is that you’re trying to connect the upper section starting from the middle of the left half-ellipse toward the upper corner of the box, and because of that, the sense of form gets lost. It would work better if you traced the line from the top of the right half-ellipse across toward the other side. The intersection point will help indicate which part of the ellipse should remain visible and which part should be erased. Hope this helps and that it makes sense!
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Améliore ta compréhension de la profondeur et de la 3D, 3 min de lecture
Master perspective by studying camera lenses—use wide-angle for drama, standard for realism, and long lenses to focus emotion and transform your storytelling.
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June Sketchbook Challenge Day 5
Hello, Here is my submission for day 5 of the June Sketchbook challenge. I am once again very happy with the result! If you happen to be part of the gaming community and watched a certain presentation today, you might know why I'm drawing some Tifa from Final Fantasy 7 and some Ryu! I am very happy with this sketch, because I realized at the end of the day that I hadn't drawn yet, but I managed to fit this in. I am happy with the posing. I definitely spent more time refining the the largest figure so the other two have poorer line quality. I honestly don't have a specific issue that's bugging me with this piece, but I know it's lacking in fundamentals in areas like anatomy and probably more. So I'll let whatever jumps out at you be the subject for feedback, Thank you!
Elven Knight
Probably spent too long on this sketch which i`ll soon colour and render.
proportions
guys so i drew up this male and female proportions chart to test my knowledge. As you can see, everything is jotted down on the right, so please feel free to correct mistakes (if you can get past my abyssmal handwriting hehehe)! Also, if there are just general anatomy issues, let me know!
6-5-2026
Day 5
Day 3
Controlled drawing , understanding shapes, shadows.
Day 5
I'm trying to be consistent guys!
6/5/2026
any critiques welcome (pls critique i wanna get better
Stylized characters
Still in the rough phase, but fixed some of the most obvious proportion mistakes. Still looking for feedback about proportions, particularly in the three-quarter view where the whole skull still feels off.
Daily sketch page, day 5
I got no time today since I need to work on other project, so just quick messy stuff today >.<