Hello! From what I can see here is that your boxes aren’t really following 1 point perspective rules The vertical and horizontal lines for the front planes of some boxes seem to be titled a bit. The front planes of boxes in 1 point perspective are usally just a straight square unless its being rotated I can also see that the converging lines of the box on the shelf are converging too fast. Try to make them parallel to the top converging line of the shelf. The cylinders look good too btw This is my first time giving someone feedback and I’m not the best at art so my apologies if my advice doesn’t work that well Also sorry my lines are shaky, I’m used to a stabilizer and my screen was moving every time I put my arm on my ipad
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