Hey! What adorable rabbits! :D I corrected one of them, but I think these observations will be helpful for your future drawings as well. :D The rabbit felt a bit off, mainly because of the perspective. Both the front and hind legs aren't quite following the perspective of the rabbit's pose. Another important factor is the lack of overlapping forms, which makes the perspective feel a bit flat. Building a solid base with simple forms like boxes, cylinders, or spheres will help you construct your drawings with a stronger sense of perspective and achieve better overlap between the forms. It doesn't have to be a clean or polished construction. Notice that my initial sketch is pretty rough, it's just there to block in the basic forms. But having that simple foundation made it much easier to draw the rabbit with a more convincing sense of perspective. :) Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback