Hello, First, cool character design ! Second I would focus more on the basic mannequin shapes before doing all the rendering, you could avoid some structural mistake that make the painting weird. For exemple the shoulders are too far away from the torso, the eyes are facing use but drawn on a 3/4er face. Good shading ! You could improve the impact by having a more darker background to avoid light on light. PS: You should submit the new version as a "revision" instead of a "paintover". I is simpler to draw over this way. | Artwod Feedback