@saritos

Peindre

Hi hi! Interesting idea and perspective choice! Lets start by making the figure bigger. It was a bit too far from the element at front and you had a lot of room to make that as the main focus. Also it makes framing much more interesting! In my feedback I used an intuitive perspective but I would recommend using 2 perspective grids until you develop a sense for depth and volume. These positions can be tricky to learn at first and it takes some time to nail down every single line somewhat correctly. No matter the skill level, generally perspective is hard subject to master to perfection. That's why we use all tools to help us out when building a picture with drastic view points like these ones. Digital drawing programs like Clip Studio Paint offer built-in perspective grids, there are plug-ins from various artists and pictures that can be found almost anywhere on the internet. Big plus would be if you grind yourself. When we set our gird,its time to utilize mannequin approach before adding organic human forms on top. The mannequin method is frequently quite successful and beneficial for learning (later on self-correction as well). Your comprehension of how each element interacts and overlaps with the volume of a human shape will be improved. It is usually simple to understand and breaks down into fundamental geometric shapes (spheres, cylinders, triangles, and squares). You will not have any trouble drawing people in any circumstance. One method for learning it is the Loomis technique.Before posing the mannequin, he does an excellent job of explaining how the human body twists and what is important to comprehend. When shifting the torso or pelvis, pay special attention to the overlaps and important body regions. Hope it helps!