@saritos

Peindre

Hello hello! Great framing! I really love the rendering of the forms! We can see you understand 3D space and you execute anatomy solidly. There are two main issues here: values and hand in front. I will start by addressing the value problem: it feels flat in some spots like the chest and face. To give more depth to the picture, we break basic values groups: light,mid tone and dark. Each of them has one tone that must be approached subtly in order to avoid confusion and a muddy look. On some spots we can cheat,we have the right to artistically express and ignore logic (but do it carefully). For example: we know that light from top would most likely hit the abdominal area but to have separation from hand on front and torso,I put it in shadow. That way we have a clear separation of values. Essentially you want to have a rhythm of dark>light>dark>light. Ambient light you added needs to be separated with a darker value in between so it doesn't mix with core light. As for the hand i would suggest to maybe find a better solution. We know Lluffy can stretch the body but the framing is awkward and cutting limbs around the wrist can result as an error. I would rather show anatomically correct posing os a hand for this framing or expand the canvas and show the power. Hope it helps!