Sorry the artwod website had some bug due to which it distorted what i drew-over . Here's the fixed overlay

Great work, really likes the painting. It is a good thing that you are trying to enjoy the process rather then focus on pin picking mistakes. If i would have to suggest some improvements in your artwork, i would suggest you to work on your shadows and values, and so i am going to explain how you could apply light and shadow principles to make your painting even more three dimensional. You can apply the principles of light and shadow on painting by first choosing a specific light source at a fixed location, and making explicit the planes of the form that you are applying the shadow upon upon. The planes may be defined by Reilly rhythm or asaro head. Now that we have both light and form, we could compare the angles between light source and form planes. For starter, limit your values to just 3 , 1. High-light area , applied on the area where light is highest, 2, Mid-value, applied on area with medium light, don't overuse for clean artworks, 3, Darkness, no colour visible at this point. And obviously complete while places where you have just white.

@saritos

Peindre

Hi hi! Drawing looks nice! You captured the actor very well! I merely made a few small adjustments that you can do in your future sketch or use digital applications to modify your photos. If there is a lot of sunlight on the side of our setup, start with a slightly stronger shadow. Our shadows will be stronger since, based on what you have here, it would be sort of a midday light. Do not be afraid to incorporate some artistic expression into your drawings. Make sure your shadows are consistent from top to bottom by following the shapes of a human body and clothing, simplifying them into geometric shapes. Readjust the mouth and iris at the end because they were out of perspective. That is it! Have fun drawing!

@ben82706

Peindre

way too realistic but good