Hi Hi Smoker looks nice and I love you rendered with ink! This just needs a few adjustments, in my opinion. I used Photoshop's Liquify feature to reposition the sketch because the back of the head appeared to be a little too big. If you need to make rapid corrections without completely redrawing the artwork, this is a really helpful tool. We should not be able to see the relationship between the top and lower arms because of the way you framed the artwork. Since it was drawing attention away, I also added a black shadow. Regarding the chest, we can only see a little portion of it, and I totally understand why the positioning is confusing. Since the smoke would be the brightest area of the picture, I added a little white to it. Other than that, the picture looks solid, be careful how you ink regarding the shadow shapes, always have in mind big>medium >small principle and keep up with practice. I personally wouldn't give this art color because in black&white looks more interesting! Hope it helps! | Artwod Feedback