Hi Hi! The page looks nice! It is great that you picked a lot of different poses and took manga artists as an inspiration! Let us start by arranging the different sketches a little better. I would choose a few characters, either the same or different, and arrange each sketch's placement. Manga artists typically use sketchbooks or blank canvases to plan their sketches by starting from one of the sides. Usually, they use a simple drawing of the head with an expression to tell a story and moving on to the entire figure. There is not a set method because we still want to maintain the randomness on the page, but a little preparation in the middle of chaos helps and adds interest to the image for the spectator. I only removed characters that I felt were excessive in my feedback, leaving those that caught my attention. I incorporated structural fixes for the feet and torso as extras. By searching for manga artists or any other artist who creates large character sketchdumps, you might find a lot of examples or such ideas online. Hope it helps!
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