Hello! Pose is very cool! Now to make it more clear, try to stay with simple approach regarding placement of the shapes. What that means: Big > medium > small Big > the main notan which defines what is in shadow and what is in light. That one keep it bold but be careful how you place it. Find appealing shapes that will compliment the idea you aim. Medium> these would be cast shadow from folds and body. Keep them mostly in hatching form so it can create nice balance with bigger shadows. Also use them to indicate where surface is curved but dont over do it. Its an easy trap to fall in so make sure you zoom out to see whole picture. Small> these are details like line weight, textures etc. You already put some in hair and face, you can try them out on his left sleeve that is in light. I focused mostly on light since you need colours in order to get feedback in colour theory. Next time make sure you include them! Keep up with inking! Looks dope on Zoro! | Artwod Feedback