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Perspective-and-form


Enchanted Forest Painting
I'm unsure of how to render more detail without ruining the values I already have established. In particular, I think the foreground and background are both too empty but I'm afraid of over-rendering objects in them.

please show me what i can improve
im very open minded and really want some criticism on basically anything :)

my first ych i opened, but it feels a little flat?
i feel like there’s not a lot of contrast, idkkk

Need help with the form/proportions of the Upper torso.
How do I improve the form or proportions of the torso? I feel like something is off about the upper torso's that I'm drawing, I'm mainly just drawing a roundish sort of square for the base of the torso, and adding the chest over it, and just indicating the ribs.

poster for my show
I feel like something is wrong with the values but I can pinpoint what, can anyone help?

Undecided
flats..

Live portrait in class
I was bored

Background study (35 mins)
Snow practice but I don't understand how to capture the volume of snow ? Also any extra tips would be appreciated!

Street-Musician ,,Hero"
Overall i was pretty happy with my idea here - A Streen-Misician that repurposed his instruments to fight (As a Character for an Heroshooter). But something just feels off and i cant put my finger on it. I feel like some parts of the design make it look amature but I cant figure out what the concept needs to make it feel more cohesive. I purposly left the rendering a bit more rough since i want to practie putting out ideas faster.