Hello there ! The way you drew the torso doesn't feel very believable. I say this because the middle section of the torso is much too narrow—it almost looks as if there isn't enough room for any organs! (Thinking in realistic terms, of course. For a more cartoony style, this could work just fine.) I adjusted the torso a bit, and you'll notice that the pelvis and rib cage are closer together at the back, which is where the body's compression occurs in this pose. The leg also feels somewhat disconnected from the pelvis, so I corrected its placement and shortened the lower portion of the leg slightly. In general, the upper and lower portions of the leg should be roughly the same length. On top of that, the arm was a bit too long, which was also affecting the overall proportions of the figure. Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback