Hey there! Think about the character's lighting. It feels a bit inconsistent for the character to be fully illuminated when the main light source is coming from behind. Of course, you could justify it with an additional artificial light from above, but personally, I think it works better to keep the character mostly in shadow. That creates a much stronger light-against-dark contrast and gives the scene more visual impact. Then, you can add a subtle amount of ambient light to the upper planes that are closest to the ceiling, such as parts of the hair and a few areas of the face, to help describe the form without flattening the lighting. Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback