I would like to know, in terms of rendering / colour, how I can improve this. Does the hair look too stiff? Too unrendered? The headdress was supposed to be more rough compared to the face, so that more attention is paid to the face, but I wonder if the texture looks too plastered on, or if it throws off the composition. It just doesn't feel like a finished, quality piece. There isn't a commercial quality to it: and I think a lot of my work has the same feeling, but it's hard for me to pin point where I'm going wrong

I would like to know, in terms of rendering / colour, how I can improve this. Does the hair look too stiff? Too unrendered? The headdress was supposed to be more rough compared to the face, so that more attention is paid to the face, but I wonder if the texture looks too plastered on, or if it throws off the composition. It just doesn't feel like a finished, quality piece. There isn't a commercial quality to it: and I think a lot of my work has the same feeling, but it's hard for me to pin point where I'm going wrong | Artwod Feedback