Overall i was pretty happy with my idea here - A Streen-Misician that repurposed his instruments to fight (As a Character for an Heroshooter). But something just feels off and i cant put my finger on it. I feel like some parts of the design make it look amature but I cant figure out what the concept needs to make it feel more cohesive. I purposly left the rendering a bit more rough since i want to practie putting out ideas faster.