I tried to get out of my comfort zone and failed, I struggle with getting the right angle of everything especially the hand that's holding the sword but face is kinda off too and I have no idea how could I fix it some help would be appreciated thank you | Artwod Feedback

I tried to get out of my comfort zone and failed, I struggle with getting the right angle of everything especially the hand that's holding the sword but face is kinda off too and I have no idea how could I fix it some help would be appreciated thank you | Artwod Feedback