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June Sketchbook Challenge Day 3
Hello, here is my submission for day 3 of the June Sketchbook challenge.
I am very happy with how this page turned out. This was all made with zero reference on hand, so the bike is pretty nonsensical, but I had fun with it.
I think what bugs me in this piece the most is the proportions of the character. I feel like the character is a bit too tall and slender for what I'm going for. I suspect that the torso is a bit elongated and that made the whole figure compensate in length.
My problem is that I do not feel in control of the character proportions. I feel like I can make a somewhat accurately proportioned character, but I can't deliberately elicit a specific body type with my drawing.
I'd love any tips on figure proportions or anything else that jumps out to you about my pages,
Thank you!