Que puis-je améliorer ?
Alien Rogue Incursion Thumbnail
This is a thumbnail I illustrated for my YouTube channel. This is just me trying to add me into illustrations for my vr/gaming channel. So I already finished this a while ago. But I wouldn’t mind seeing a structured critique of it.
My struggles was lighting and indecision. Also the first time I’ve really played with dramatic foreshortening. I was also attempting a new layering structure trying to streamline a process. I think it helped in some ways and hindered me in others. I’ll say also for the indecision part. I couldn’t decide have the line work or remove it. So I ended up keeping it, but I think it kind of makes it feel like I wanted painterly but forced the lines to stay. What are your thoughts and maybe edits? I also feel like the background is half baked.
So in summary, environment, rendering process, perspective and form.