@saritos

Peindre

Hello hello! Editing a sketch can be challenging at times, and we might lose track of where to put certain features. First, let us push our hair up and open our faces more. We want to have a clear vision of it because expression is our main emphasis and allows us to determine if we arranged the parts correctly. Additionally, remove any overlapping lines (such as hair on eyebrows) since these can further confuse our minds when we draw. You can choose what you want at the front and what you want at the back with ease while editing. I gave a more attractive nose shape to the desired look. The current setup is a little bit cartoonish for set style. Lastly, compared to the rest of the face, the current mouth is flat. When drawing the outline of a mouth, be sure to follow the contours of the face. Cheekbones should also be positioned a little higher. The rest looks pretty good! Hope it helps!