The best advice I can give you is, If you think it's boring then others will too. I would keep working this piece until you are satisfied with it OR leave it be a piece you used to learn. Not everything needs to be put out as "good". Some pieces are for you to grow or just have fun with. If you want to make it less boring for your next piece, I would suggest looking into composition. That will help you understand how to guide the viewer's eye to look at different things. That will help with "boring" pieces though there's a lot more than that to make up a "good" piece. That said, I think what you have here is fine. Its got contrast, it has easily readible characters and poses. Even the dynamics between characters are on point. Part of what makes this piece "boring" is that there is no easily available resting point for the eye. Overall it's good, keep going.
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