Green & Red

I can't seem to get past this stage with any of my drawings. I am not sure what's wrong with the perspective as well as the anatomy, among other things that I can't put my finger on.

Day 14

another day

Foreshortening demo

I am suffering from foreshortening. Can you tell me how can I improve it. Also can you recommend some videos.

6/26/26

Day 26

27-06-26

Struggling with construction, perspective and foreshortening. The characters feel kinda flat and I want them to look more 3D. Any tips on improving the overall forms and depth?

Manga panel practice

I was practicing one page comic/manga. I am trying to practice telling small stories - small event in order to slowly build up to multipage ones. the top 3 panels went well I feel like? the third panel top i like the most because I could apply the small - medium - big well from Arne's intermediate road which I have been enjoying. The bottom 2 were meant to be quick action-reaction - weapon draw to weapon/hand disabled. This evolved into what was meant to be a ricochet which I don't think really is readable. I learned a lot about perspective here. I would be grateful for any feedback - probably not understandable in terms of what was happening in bottom 2 panels I reckon?

June 30 Sketchbook Pages Challenge Day 26

Just played the new Star Fox, and I had to do some fanart, because I was excited. The ship was a good challenge perspective wise, and I don't really draw animals that much so that was also interesting.

Sketch 25 - More heads

More heads from an asaro head reference.

Day 26

I tried to make a creature like "barguest. " I used a hippo and a heron. I made an attempt to create interesting shapes. Any recommendations ?