Hello Ian, Nice interaction between two characters, the composition is nice and you also had a bit of context with the table which is important in my opinion when you want to convey a scene. And we have a nice hint of perspective as well with the token. I decided to put the hand of Data just in front of is face since he's delivering a sensitive information (or at least I thought it would convey more of the secretive aspect of the moment) I also open a bit the pose of Dr . Crusher in order to keep her more at ease even though she's probably tense in that moment. I also added a chair in the back of Data to reinforce the impression of the scene. (I'm on a digital support and I realise some of the proposition I'm suggesting can be hard to figure out on paper) Great piece. Keep it up ^^

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Ian Gildersleeve · 2026-06-03T18:44:21.416Z

I am continuing with trying an illustration of a scene from a Star Trek book, yet having trouble with Data. I want him leaning toward Dr. Crusher, whispering with his hand up by his mouth, yet I can’t get the forearm right that goes away from the viewer. Any advice of how you would draw that considering the foreshortening?

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