I think its pretty good but the mouth needs to be a little higher. With Loomis construction, it is usually placed closer to a 1/3 down from the nose toward the chin. The top of the nose by the brow line appears to be sunken in when drawn to the right of the center line. Moving the nose left a bit might help that. The eyes are looking in different directions. Check the iris placement on the ball guidlines you have. You'll want the iris placement to be the same on both. 😁 | Artwod Feedback