Hiya, sorry for the wait!! I truly love this piece, my main comment would be about making the lighting a bit more consistent within the figures and the piece as a whole. Keep reminding yourself of where the light source is as you are working through a painting (for example, the left figure had shadow at the top of the forearm, but then in the tail it came from another angle). I think the hair strands look lovely but I simplified them a little bit. As you can see in the figure on the left, try to have some bigger and smaller shapes in the volume of the hair instead of breaking it up in many, similar sized pieces! c: I hope it helps and keep up the great work!! | Artwod Feedback