Hey there! Amazing work! Your hatching technique is so good! I wish I could do that too, haha. Anyway, I made a few small corrections. I only made a slight adjustment to the beast’s pose, but what stood out to me the most was that the head didn’t feel fully connected to the body. I think this is because the neck armor isn’t clearly wrapping around the neck, so there isn’t enough room to show a bit of the beast’s neck. The armor should follow the shape of the neck, but right now it feels a bit too front-facing instead of wrapping around the form. On the other hand, it feels a little odd that the character’s head is turned in a 3/4 view while the right arm is pointing almost directly to the side. I think it would make more sense if the arm followed the same direction as the head, so I rotated it slightly. Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback